Jesse Teller

Tag: Jordai

  • City of Exiles: Chapter 1

    City of Exiles: Chapter 1

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    FATHER AND SON One Year Before The Escape As the thick, heavy sword penetrated Gaulator’s ribs, puncturing his lung, he dropped to his knees and experienced a moment of clarity. He saw the future of his nation, his tribe, and his family. Gaulator Stonefist saw the coming war. He saw the deaths of his sons.…

  • Write Like a Gangster, Class 19: Dialogue Continues

    Write Like a Gangster, Class 19: Dialogue Continues

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    Hey, ho, let’s go! Reading Assignment: “Collision” and “Mrs. Galvin” chapters from Teardrop Road The Vanishing Tag This is the lesson I have heard when it comes to dialogue: Don’t tag too often. Don’t get too specific with your tag. First, let’s define tag. A tag is very simple. He said is a tag. We…

  • Dreveren: Chapter 1

    Dreveren: Chapter 1

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    CALM Nine Years After The Escape The ship froze to the shore within an hour of reaching it. It was an ice shore, a skirt of ice that surrounded the continent and barred the way into any ports. Joho claimed that cities had been built on the ice and they allowed for the passage of…